From: r <johnsyntax@...>
Date: 2007-01-01T17:35:24+09:00
Subject: Re: Newbie: It works, how can I make it better?

rwtnorton@charter.net wrote:
> Corrections / advice / criticisms are welcome.
> (I think that I prefer the original version.)

Me too.  I like your heredoc usage, but overall it's too much gold
plating,  looks like java to me.  I would feel the pain of the next guy
to maintain this.  All the meat would have to be recompressed into one
paragraph.
-R